Friday, October 29, 2010

Reflective Essay

          I want to talk about how this year has opened new writing styles, habits, and ideas, and skills for me during the first quater of my freshman year. This year at ASTI having two writing classes (English and Wrting 1) has helped me a lot even though we have only gone through one quarter. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the different ways that I have progressed as a writer here at ASTI.  

I think that this years writing for me has been much different than any other year in the past. The major change for me has been the blogging process. I have found that the blogging process has opened up new ways of writing. I like blogging for a couple of different reasons. I like it because first, it keeps me interested because it is online. I like because I do everything on the computer and having all of my writing be centralized on the computer works really well for me. The other thing that makes the blogging process much easier than just regular writing, is the feedback we get. Since everyone in the class can see each others work, the feedback is not only from the teacher. To take that even further, being able to see every one's work triggers ideas for new writing. The response posts that we have to do every week makes us look at our classmates work and triggers the idea and writing process.

The open writing we do on our blogs has helped me as a writer, and simply as a person in a couple different ways. I feel like the blog is just a way for me to vent about what I need to talk about. Even though I have not really used the blog for anything personal, you can tell that even in my response post to Stan Andersons blog about missing assignments I used the blog to explain how strongly I felt about it. The other thing that I have found myself usung the blog for is simmply to write when I am bored and have nothing better to do. For example, the post I did about my Xbox. I was simply playing my Xbox all day and I felt like I should do soemthing and so I posted. That is just one more way that blogging has helped me as a writer.I think that open ended writing on the blogs are much different than structured writing assignments. With structured assignments, you are being forced to just write about a specific topic. From my personal experience being forced to write about a specific thing is the number one cause of writers block. When we are able to just write whenever and whatever we want on our blogs, I almost never find myself in writers block because I am ususally writing for plesure. When I write about what I want to, I actually find myself enjoying writing.

           
I think that ASTI’s writing and english program has done good things for me. English class has taught me how to do many things other than just reading and comprehending things we read. I have learned to read between the lines and pput th puzzle together of what we are reading at the time. The last thing that I have learned in english class is how to catch and fix redundancy in my writing. Even though I probably have some redundancy in this essay, I am working on it. Writing one has helped me a lot as well. The writing class here has been different than any onther writing class that I have had before. In her class we have explored different types of writing, and how to write it. We have gone through grammer, descriptive writing,and now we are in the narrative section. Too be ohnest, I did not do to well in the decripive essay unit. All this shows is that I need to work on it, and because of the unit I know what exactly I need too do. Now we are on the narrative unit, and I am actually enjoying it. I have always been fairly good at writing stories, so this unit seems exciting too me. I think I will do much better on this essay than the last descriptive essay simply because I actually get to tell astory. The problem with the descriptive essay is that we had to decrobe something that happened with out telling a story. That was really hard for me, and I received a pretty low grade on it.

Overall I feel like this school, aswell as the english and writing teachers I have are helping me become the best writer that I can be. I am definatley thankful, because I know that as I go onto college classes, the expectations for my writing will go up. I am planing to take a college class nest semester freshman year, so these writing skills that I am in the process of learning will help me tremendously. I definatley feel like coming to ASTI was a good decision, and I look forward to becoming a better writer.

Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Of Mice & Men

This book had many sub-conflicts, which in my opinion all originated from one main conflict. To me the main conflict is very complicated, and it takes a bit of understanding about the character named Lennie. Lennie has a mental defect, which causes him to act very childish and slow. He has done things before that caused him and George to have to leave the city of weed in search of a new job. I thin that the conflict is Character (Lennie) vs. Himself because of his fate. His fate being his mental defect that he can not control because he was born with it.

            First, the conflict between Lennie and the lady with the red dress in Weed. All Lenny wanted to do was to touch the lady’s red dress. Because of Lennie’s disease, he did not know that just going and touching the dress was not ok. Plus, he did not let go of her dress because he absolutely had to touch it, so he did not let go when the girl tried to pull away. This caused George and Lennie to be run out of town and try to find a new job. Yes the conflict of this event was Lennie vs. the lady, but it was a result of Lennie vs. himself because of his disease.

            The second sub-conflict I want to address, I the conflict between George and Lennie. Because of Lennie’s defect, George has to watch after Lennie, and make sure that he is ok. As a result of George having to watch after Lennie, George keeps losing his jobs because Lennie screws things up for him by doing something completely ridiculous like the accident in Weed. Once again, it is not directly Lennie’s fault because he could not control his defect, but no one else is to blame. This proves again that it is character vs. self because of Lennie’s defect.

            The last sub-conflict I am going to address is huge accident where Lennie accidently killed Curly’s wife. All Lennie was trying to do was touch her hair, but instead he accidently snapped her neck (because of his defect). This resulted in George just ending Lennie’s life by shooting him in the back of the head. Personally I think that George did the right thing, because Lennie would have been killed by other people in the end anyway, so George just ended it. This all happened once again because of Lennie’s defect which leads to character vs. self. All of these examples simply prove my point about how the main conflict is character vs. self because of Lennie’s fate of his disease.

             

Thursday, October 7, 2010

I Can't Wait For This Summer

This summer is going to be a lot of fun for me. The main thing that I am looking forward to is the driving. Literally a week after school gets out I will be fifteen and a half, and able to get my drivers permit. Even though I Will still have to drive with a licensed adult it will still be a lot of fun, and one step closer to my licence. I have been waiting to be able to drive for a long time, and it only seems like time is going slower as i get closer to being able to drive. My parents and grandma let me drive around the old navy base here in Alameda sometimes, and my grandma lets me drive around her neighborhood. There are a couple of things wrong with that. First its not legal, and second i can't really drive anywhere. I simply can't wait to be able to drive.

The second thing that I can not wait for this summer, is being able to actually work. I have been lifeguarding as a volunteer the past couple of summers here in Alameda, but I am sick of not being paid. This summer I will be able to get a work permit and actually get a real job as a lifeguard. My cousin used to be a lifeguard when I was a child, and I have always wanted to follow her foot steps when it comes to lifeguarding. Now that I am fifteen, i am able to finally do that and lifeguard.

This summer is going to be filled with new and excited things that i am looking forward too. I like the fact that I am finally growing up and able to do more things that I have been waiting for for a couple of years. Driving, lifeguarding, and what ever else plays out this summer!

Video Games... Good or Bad?

I am a nerd when it comes to video games, and I probably play way too much than I should. I am a huge Halo fan, and I recently got the new one called Halo Reach. Everyday after school, I have been  rushing home and getting homework out the way so I can hurry up and turn on the Xbox. Some scientists say that video games are not healthy for the brain, and that people should not play them. As you read on, I will give my opinion of why I think video games do not have a negative effect.

Personally as a video game addict, I think that these types of games do nothing but good things for you. First, they help you practice your hand eye coordination because you have to control your person in the game and make him/her do things to complete the game. Second, it practices multitasking. Many times in a game, you will have to try and complete many different objectives at once. This makes you think and really try to focus on what you have to do to complete the game. Last but not least they are simply fun to play, and they help keep you from being bored.

Yes I can admit that i probably play way more video games than I should, but lets just face it. As a teenage boy I am addicted!

Friday, October 1, 2010

Mom.... it's just 1 missing assignment

I found this quote from Stan Anderson's Blog and I found that I completely agree with what he is saying.
"It is not the end of the world if i have one missing assignment....."
I agree when stan says that parents freak out about little things such as one little missing assignment. I do find Schoolloop a very useful tool to help us stay in top of our grades, but when it comes to parents.... Schoolloop is a curse. Sometimes when you know you are not doing so well in a class, you don't want your parents to find out, and to just have a little bit if time to figure out how to pull the grade up. But apparently thats not how Schoolloop works. I found that every night your parents actually get the emails form Schoolloop before us students. This is just perfect because now when we have a bad grade, your parents know about it first and you come home and get in trouble.

I love the fact that my parents are there for me when it comes to school, and in anything that I do, but sometimes it seems like parents only look at the bad things. They will see your grades with all A's and maybe one C, and the C is all they pay attention too. I understand that they want us to do well in school, but sometimes that constant nagging about our grades doesn't help, but wait it gets better. When you have a bad grade, and they know because of Schoolloop, they use it to their advantage. When you ask for something, the fist  thing that comes out of their mouths is "have you seen or grades on Schoolloop?". It has been better this year, because my grades have been much better at ASTI than in middle school, but still is a little bit of space when it comes to grades too much to ask for?

A Difference in Life & School

All of a sudden, life just became much complicated. I have school, music lessons, after school clubs, and a little sister that I have to watch sometimes. Middle school was all gravy. To me it felt like I was sailing through it with out any obstacles in my way. All of a sudden, I am realizing that life is not so simple. As I am getting older, I am realizing the responsibilities I have are way more serious. No one is here to tell me to do my homework, or to make sure that I study for my tests. Of course my parents are there for me if I need help, but they expect me to do what i need to do with out being told. School especially is getting a little bit harder as we get further into the school year. I want to focus on my experience at ASTI so far.

I have some classes that are easy, and some that are hard. Some classes have a test every week, and some classes never have tests. At first, I felt like ASTI was a walk in the park. The first month of school was easy because we were still getting into the habit of things. Now things are kicking into gear and finally getting interesting. For example, yesterday we had three tests. Math, HIstory, and Writing. The stress level is going up, but I think I can handle it. As long as I manage my time, and stay organized i should do fine.

Im doing good with school, and I look forward to getting freshman year over with. I think that the next three years at ASTI are going to be easier since I will be used to the system. I do plan to try and start taking a college class or two next semester, and over the summer, but I have to wait and see how things are going first.

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